Sunday, March 8, 2020

State of the #SHEA part 12: The Necessity of "Catapulting"



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I don’t recall the name behind the Tweet, but something that went up on the TGD hashtag last Monday night after the broadcast made me laugh… which is pretty noteworthy, considering how stricken many of us felt by the end of “Fixation”.

The Tweet said something to the effect of I see all these people complaining about wanting to see more medical drama and less about (Shaun’s) love life… all I can think is that if you aren’t able to handle the eight minutes a week that the show devotes to the doctors’ personal lives, maybe you’re watching the wrong show.

Amen to that, and pardon me while I pull on my producer cap for a minute… because while the duties of a producer vary widely, depending on the type of production being done and the seniority level at hand, producers almost always have to keep an eye on the proverbial clock.

If you’ve been reading State of the #SHEA since I started it in January, you know I’ve been discussing the time breakout of certain TGD episodes as they relate to advancing Shaun’s relationships with both Lea and Carly. It’s a very delicate dance when it comes to that “eight minutes a week” (which is probably closer to 12 or 14 depending on what’s going on, but you get the idea). It’s why characters like Dr. Andrews and Dr. Lim are sometimes absent from the canvas for entire episodes despite being part of the (full time?) cast. It’s why Morgan’s R.A. issues aren’t front and center with every operation with which she’s involved (yet). It’s why we haven’t seen Glassman’s new wife Debbie since 3 x 09 “Incomplete”, and why we may not see Carly for the remainder of the season (assuming she remains a part of TGD at all). Those 12 to 14 minutes have to be metered out so that every character appearance, camera shot, and spoken word has maximum impact. The amount of minutes in an episodic, scripted TV drama are pretty finite from week to week.

I’ve been thinking about that with regards to the Shaun/Carly/Lea arc this season, and now that we’re reaching the season’s end I’m especially mindful of how ambitious this arc truly is.

Essentially, this arc breaks down into 3 parts:
1)   The development of Shaun and Carly’s relationship (Episodes 3x1 “Disaster” through 3x10 “Friends and Family”)
2)   The conflict that Shaun and Lea’s relationship creates within Shaun’s relationship with Carly (Episodes 3x11 “Fractured” through 3x15 “Unsaid”)
3)   The re-definition of Shaun and Lea’s relationship (Episodes 3x16 “Autopsy” through the forthcoming 3x20, which was announced this week to be titled “I Love You”)

So, say Shaun’s portion of the “personal stories” in an episode comes to around 6 minutes max (with “Friends and Family” being a very notable exception to that rule this season). If you do the math, that means the writers had about an hour’s worth of minutes to A) establish Shaun and Carly’s relationship, B) build it through a litany of early peaks and valleys regarding physical affection, only to C) have Lea be the one Shaun seeks, and receives, in the dark hours surrounding his final confrontations with his father.

The writers then got about half that time (30 minutes over 5 episodes) to D) deal with the fallout from Wyoming and Shaun’s renewed commitment to Carly (including the consummation of that relationship and a bit of “smooth sailing” time),  E) develop trouble-in-paradise as Carly’s jealousy of Lea grows (which also requires time for Lea to re-assert herself on the storytelling canvas), F) find a way for Carly’s jealousy to be justified, which causes her to not only break it off with Shaun, but also cue him towards Lea.

Which then leaves the writers with approximately another 30 minutes to G) have Shaun come to terms with his true feelings and confess them to Lea, H) have both Shaun and Lea deal with the fallout of their “confession” conversation, and what that does and doesn’t mean for their relationship going forward… culminating in I) whatever the end-of-season goal for #Shea happens to be. (Obviously, with three episodes still to air as I write this, there’s a hot mess of unknowns on this last bend of the arc.)

That’s an incredible amount of story to get through—mostly via scenes lasting no more than 2 or 3 minutes—in a year’s worth of medical drama. And that’s not even factoring in the need for all this to be done at a pace and style that makes sense for an autistic lead character! Seems like a first-of-its-kind situation to me… especially in a medium where diversity of any kind has been slow to come by, let alone the kind that involves disabilities.

How on earth have the TGD writers managed to keep pace? The term I’ve coined for it is The Catapult… a minute or less of dialogue and/or action that propels the plot far beyond what is typically covered in that amount of time. The Catapult has probably been utilized in all TGD story arcs at one time or another, but for our purposes—surprise!—I’m honing in on Shaun and Lea.

Catapult #1: After the first nine episodes of season 3 kept Lea’s screen presence to a minimum, “Friends and Family” stirred the pot not only with the subject matter, but Shaun’s choosing of Lea over Carly to join him and Glassman in Wyoming. The majority of the episode took moments from scenes here and there to re-introduce Shaun and Lea’s friendship—which was very welcome all by itself—but The Catapult came when Lea rushed to soothe Shaun during his meltdown. 

In that final 45 seconds of the episode we saw Shaun and Lea reach a “new level of intimacy” all their own; a very unique kind that was innocent and blameless, yet still shook Carly’s faith to a point where Lea unwittingly went from being roommate and confidante to Other Woman Who Has To Leave Her Own Apartment. Oh, and Shaun swiftly transitioned from being torn about both women to making very definitive choices (agreeing to kick Lea out, telling Carly he loved her, losing his virginity to her in the following episode). All that… as the result of 45 seconds of gripping, dialogue-free emotion.

Catapult #2: Five episodes later, the time had come for Carly to break up with Shaun because of Lea. But how could that come about when a) Shaun appeared unaware of his feelings, b) Lea appeared unaware of her feelings, and c) Carly appeared to be feeling more certain that all was well? 



Maybe we should just call this Catapult The Magic of Karaoke. For it took just over 30 seconds of Shaun and Lea laughing, dancing, and slo-mo mic-sharing together to get the message across to a crestfallen Carly that the two of them were in love and needed to be together—even if they didn’t fully realize it themselves.

The more I think about it, the more I’m utterly impressed with the way Sal Calleros and Thomas L. Moran (the writers of “Unsaid”) pulled that off. They found a plausible situation where Shaun and Lea could run into each other with their respective dates (Shaun might not normally end up in a large, crowded bar, but he was there to celebrate the mute child’s surgical breakthrough.) They ramped up the tension a hair when Lea crashed Shaun and Carly’s PDA attempt. They added an element to the sequence which hearkens back to Shaun and Lea’s unforgettable road trip (the karaoke). And through it, the created a space where Shaun and Lea could again, innocently and blamelessly (like with Catapult #1), shake poor Carly to the core with the realization that Shaun was with the wrong woman. And that SHE’D have to be the one to tell him. They did all that in just over 30 seconds.

Catapult #3 was, in some ways, maybe the most challenging yet—and the first one to engage dialogue over action. I may pull it out of Catapult contention by season’s end, depending on what happens from here… but to me, for now, “Shaun, you’re autistic… you can’t ‘fix’ that!” qualifies. Not because it sounded cruel (to the point of uncharacteristic) coming out of Lea’s mouth, but because that sentence instantly propelled the twosome to a point of estrangement. When Lea found herself walking wordlessly out of the apartment at the conclusion of “Autopsy,” there was still quite a bit of oh-God-where-do-they-go-from-here in the air. Shaun took that uncertainty and fueled it into the duration of the “Fixation” episode. Lea took that uncertainty, and tried to roll with whatever came next—remember that during the apartment scene in “Fixation”, she described their confession conversation as “having left things in a weird place”. But when Shaun kept pressing forward without listening, kept insisting without awareness, Lea knew exactly where “things” needed to go, and she took them there—with just seven words. 




Now, was this the right thing to do from a scripting standpoint? That’s what I ask myself every time I’ve seen the character of Lea further vilified this week on social media. Is it possible that, in the show’s interest/need to get these two to the rock-bottom “Heartbreak” of Monday’s episode… they might have taken things too far? Which is to say that IF something were to happen before season’s end that, yes, “catapulted” Shaun and Lea in some other (daresay, positive) fashion… can viewers still be enticed to jump aboard the good ‘ship #SHEA and put the closing scenes of “Fixation” into perspective?

I certainly hope so, but as I said earlier, much of this storyline is uncharted territory in prime-time TV. Catapult moments have been deeply effective for #Shea, but the risk for such a moment over-shooting its mark is always there. Conventional wisdom with this show is to trust the writers, and trust the process. Heading into these final three episodes of the season—the latter two apparently punctuated by a MAJOR event (see Freddie Highmore’s recent interview)—I plan to keep my trust intact.

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WISH LIST FOR “HEARTBREAK”

I’ll be honest—I kind of want this episode over with already because the impatience demons are doing tap dances in my brain with a collective eagerness to jump to the 2-part season finale. Plus, I think three weeks in a row of Shaun on the low end of love is wearing ALL of us down. But if you read what I wrote up there about The Catapult, you know every moment of this show counts… especially this late in the season! So here are some things that I’m hoping to see, in some capacity, in “Heartbreak”:

*      Lea in reactionary mode. Assuming she’s in this episode at all, which is by no means guaranteed… I want to see how Lea’s doing in the aftermath of “Fixation”. We’ve talked a lot on this blog (and in the comments) about the need for Lea’s side of things to be better represented; while I don’t expect that to happen overnight, I’d appreciate a scene. Any scene. By herself, or in conversation with someone that isn’t Shaun, or in a music montage at the end of the episode with the lyrics doing a lot of the work… seriously, I’m not picky.


*      Claire in counsel mode. We know she’s visiting Shaun at the apartment; what I’m hoping is that she’s got more to say than another spin on what she said last week about accepting things and moving on. (Offering some insight to Lea’s potential POV would be a nice alternative.) While I’d obviously enjoy her paying Lea a work-break visit as well, she apparently has more going on with Dash this week… so I think her personal time on this episode is already maxed out.

     Glassman and Lea. They’re overdue for another scene together. I don’t know that they’ll get the kind I’m hoping for until the two-part finale, but one possible reaction Lea could deliver this week—based on her track record—is an attempt to give two-weeks notice at St. B. I say attempt because if she does this, I presume we’d see her doing so in Glassman’s presence. I also presume she wouldn’t actually go through with it. But a minute or so of preliminary conversation between them could be enough to tip Glassman (and us) off as to her state of mind.

        *      One thing I admittedly DON’T wish for this week, for once, is Shaun and Lea trying to talk to each other. It would appear that Shaun is done “fixing” (for lack of a better word) and is just trying to get through the day in “Heartbreak”… if Lea’s feeling remorseful, I hope she’s able to keep it to herself for now.


If you’ve got your own wish list for “Heartbreak”, or any other thoughts to share… jump into the comments, or tag me on Twitter @KLBSt8ofSk8).

14 comments:

Andreas said...
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Andreas said...

Bravo Kelli! Your analysis of the overall structure of this story arc is enlightening. And I’m thankful that you pointed out with how little screen time the writers developed this complex story so far.

I might add that over the course of all 3 seasons most scenes between Shaun and Lea took place in the mornings and evenings (when both are off work) and these short scenes were placed at the beginning and end of episodes like a bracket of private life around a long workday at the hospital.

When viewers ask to abandon this little screen time for the sake of more medical stuff (or even neurotypical romance) they degrade the agency and adulthood of the impaired lead character. With the season finale looming, an impression grows in me that this might be by design.

Shaun’s self-agency was at the center of seasons 1 and 2. He had to struggle free from the good-natured sheltering of his surrogate father Dr. Glassman. Then he had to stand his ground against Dr. Han, who denied him the ability to be a surgeon and put the mentally impaired out of sight, in a closet if you like, to only dust him off when his diagnostical genius was needed.

In all these incidents, the audience closed ranks with the beloved hero, fighting for his right to be recognized as equal and valued for his professional assets.

With season 3 Shaun’s quest for self-agency continued but moved forward in the realm of romance. Now cracks are forming in the audience.

There are those who don’t wish to see his struggles in this area, there are those who find him unfit for love, there are those who can’t see him with a neurotypical partner. The viewers have become season 1’s Glassman, they have become season 2’s Dr. Han.

The Good Doctor reveals the well-hidden prejudices against the impaired in many of its viewers, even the well-meaning. This is an enormous achievement by the writers. We can’t know for sure how much of this was intended by David Shore’s crew. To which extent it got out of their control already. But we have to bow to the courage of Jasika Nicole and Paige Spara to take all the hate; and the production crew to risk sagging ratings.

All we can hope for is that they already had ideas in mind how to redeem the characters in the remaining episodes, when they started into the season. As you described it Kelli, they have themselves proven to be resourceful.

Darlennes Dias said...

What to say? Simply blessed hour that wandering around the twiter I found you Kelli! I just thank you for the opportunity to read your analysis and even if you have discouraged some, but it is more important that it clarifies things that go unnoticed ... now I am a fan of following your blog, although I don’t comment so much, but I always read. I very much agree with everything Andreas said above, and I believe that the goal of the series is not to be a soap opera that follows what most people believe, but the goal is to make everyone aware of various issues that are erased, forgotten and overlooked in many ... Anyway, I love the series and I always congratulate the entire production, writers, actors, everyone who has given so much to this show ... My fans are for Shaun, regardless of whether they are suffering, painful, but that he is happy , achieve everything you deserve, be recognized and never abandon this sincere, hopeful and true way. Let the tears come that we have the prepared handkerchiefs.

Andreas said...

While I was listening to the TGD soundtrack of my own, I got an idea how the Lea character could be redeemed in-line with the customs of the series so far. I doubt that the writers would have chosen this course exactly, so take it as an example how things could be handled. In no way it is a prediction of the actual course!

I was listening to “A Kiss With A Fist” by Florence + The Machine. Lea is dancing to the song in the opening scene of 2.12 Aftermath:

You hit me once/
I hit you back/
You gave a kick/
I gave a slap/
You smashed a plate over my head/
Then I set fire to our bed/
[…]
A kiss with a fist is better then none/
[…]

The lyrics stand for all the characters shown in the sequence in the aftermath of the quarantine, but especially they depict the hard struggles Shaun and Lea have fought recently in season 2. Furthermore, the lyrics describe a very unhealthy, violent relationship in the magnitude of abuse. Violence in relationships can be “inherited” from childhood experience.

A study by Stovall-McClough and Cloitre (2006, p. 225) found that individuals with unresolved childhood abuse are 7.5 times more likely to be diagnosed with post traumatic stress disorder (PTSD). Additionally, 57% of childhood abuse victims developed an unresolved attachment style in adult relationships.

Adults with unresolved or disorganized attachment style might display behaviors such as:

- being unpredictable
- being aggressive
- are easily overwhelmed by stress
- struggle with friendships
- struggle to maintain romantic relationships
- struggle to keep a job
- struggle with advancing their career

Does this ring some bells? Claire’s therapist suggested PTSD from childhood abuse (3.11), she was never seriously attached to any mate (poor Jared). In fact, most of the characters are scarred from childhood: Rich Jared was abandoned by his parents (1.7). Warrior Park suffers from his dad’s mantra “Be like stone, never cry.” (2.11). Medical Morgan is the outcast in a family of artists (3.13). And savant Shaun, well… you know.

As AmyD pointed out, Lea only speaks fondly of her memories with dead Grandpa Rod and ice bathing in general. Her living family is a mess (2.7; 3.10). We don’t know the specifics other than the failed shop in Hershey. But her unstable relationships and personality traits are consistent with an unresolved attachment style caused by childhood trauma.

Another abusive childhood might seem a little unimaginative with the long-established pattern, but it is a traumatic experience the audience can easily relate to. And St. Bonaventure is as much a psychiatric ward to the staff as a med bay to the patients… ;)

REFERENCES
Stovall-McClough, K. C., & Cloitre, M. (2006). Unresolved attachment, PTSD, and dissociation in women with childhood abuse histories. Journal of Consulting and Clinical Psychology, 74(2), 219–228. https://doi.org/10.1037/0022-006X.74.2.219

Kelli Lawrence said...

WELCOME Darlene! And thank you so much for reading (and the Twitter follow too). Handkerchiefs are ready to go. We'll watch together. It'll be okay.

Andreas said...

I guess Shaun won’t be much interested in talking to Lea in this episode. In his mind he has lost the game. He will be in a totally depleted state.

If the writers are really wicked, they might even pull up the newest statistics on health risks: high-functioning individuals with ASD (HFA) are 9.4 times more likely to die by suicide compared to neurotypical controls, up to 66% report suicide ideation and up to 35% have had concrete plans on suicide in the past.

But… that would be the really, really bad for Lea’s character. So, I doubt it. Just wanted to mention how serious such situations can get in real life.

Amy D said...

Brilliant analysis, Kelli!

I'm not sure how much of Lea we'll see tonight, if any, but I would be very surprised if we saw her with Shaun in "Heartbreak."

Three episodes was how long we had to put up with Dr. Han at the end of last season. I'd have to look it up, but the estrangement between Shaun and Glassman in season 1 lasted almost the entire second half of the season. And they've been building things with Shaun and Lea since "Friends and Family." They've done some things I honestly never dreamed they'd do, like having Lea get a job at the hospital, so she is now in the position to interact with everyone in the cast, instead of being isolated with just Shaun and Glassman, and I hope we'll be seeing more of that in season 4. (She and Morgan need to have a little chat about what Morgan said that Shaun reported to Lea, but I don't know if they'll do that this season or not.) And I'm thrilled that they did that, because I've always liked Lea, and always rooted for her and Shaun, and to me, the writers and producers putting Lea to work at St. Bonaventure cements her place on the canvas.

I've felt since the ending of "Fixation" that this was a temporary setback. Shaun has had plenty of them before. He forgave Glassman first after their break in season 1, and he approached Glassman about being friends again, and Glassman turned him away initially. But then Glassman got his brain cancer diagnosis, and Shaun pushed for Glassman to get a second opinion, and ended up being there for him during his cancer treatment.

Then in season 2, Dr. Han had it out for Shaun from the start. He tried to shove him off into Pathology, and when Shaun stood up for himself and insisted he had the right to be a surgeon, Han's response was to fire him. Then Shaun was injured in the bar and wound up a patient at the hospital, with Glassman and Lea sitting vigil at his bedside until he woke up, and Han was the one sent packing while Shaun was reinstated as a surgical resident.

So now we're at the end of season 3. Shaun has had feelings for Lea for a long time, and finally acknowledged those feelings to her. She returns his feelings, but doesn't believe they can work as romantic partners. Tonight, Shaun wrapped in a blanket, holed up at home on the couch, with an unshaven face and a mess on the coffee table, is akin to where Shaun was emotionally after Glassman told Shaun Glassman was dying, and after Han fired him and forced him out of the hospital entirely: the total darkness before the dawn.

So the next two episodes simply MUST have some sort of resolution for Shaun, and for Shaun and Lea. We won't have all the answers yet, and neither will they, but at this point, we, and they, don't need all the answers. We just need Lea to explain herself, and to become unafraid enough to take the leap of faith that being in a romantic relationship with Shaun will require. The rest they can figure out in season 4. This is what I'm really hoping happens with them by season's end.

Andreas said...

Now it seems that the big gun, pardon me, the Big Catapult will be in fact shaking the ground when fired...

"Hurt" - In the first episode of the two-part season finale, the city of San Jose is rocked by a massive earthquake that puts the staff of St. Bonaventure Hospital on high alert as they race to assess the damage and account for the safety of their colleagues and friends. Meanwhile, Dr. Neil Melendez and Dr. Aaron Glassman are attending a charity event when their lives are threatened by the earthquake on an all-new episode of "The Good Doctor," 

https://www.broadwayworld.com/bwwtv/article/Scoop-Coming-Up-on-a-New-Episode-of-THE-GOOD-DOCTOR-on-ABC-Monday-March-23-2020-20200309

Lots of misattribution of arousal ahead. ;)

Barbara said...

Andreas,

I followed your link. Interesting fact in the cast listing -- Dylan Kingwell will appear as Steve Murphy. Tissues at the ready...

Andreas said...

Yes, I saw his name, too. So, we can assume Shaun will have a vision of his brother again under high stress like before his first lead surgery.

Some quick thought about hospitals and earthquakes (wittnesed one so far): critical infrastructure will be

- electricity
- communications
- fresh water
- waste disposal

Kelli Lawrence said...

*** JUST A REMINDER****

Andreas (and maybe others reading) don't get to watch TGD when it airs in the U.S.....

*******No spoilers from "Heartbreak" here in the comments, OK?************

I hope to get my next post up by Wednesday. Maybe Thursday. But hopefully Wednesday.

Barbara, Thanks for the good catch about Dylan! I think that's a good (and yes, always emotional) sign!

Andreas said...

I'm looking forward to your new insights! (BTW: I'm already informed about the general direction of 3.18 - I'm way too "nebby", still cant wait for the whole episode to come online)

Kelli Lawrence said...

Sonya shared the link to your new Reddit post, so I thought you'd already managed to watch it!

Speaking of which, would it be alright if I share that link on Twitter? I think other TGD viewers that aren't on Reddit (like myself) could really benefit from it!

Andreas said...

Go forward! I love to write and love to be read. ;)